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Genious =0 =0 =0

Maybe a bit longer :P

Can be better.

You have the potential, you just need to put more time into those crucial effects, and overall put in more time to edit and smooth the movements.

And this needs to be longer, it ended too abruptly, if this was maybe 50 seconds long atleast, it could have gotten a much better score.

FUN!

Somewhat fun to watch! I enjoyed it to a point.

Penboy responds:

Thanks :)

loved it

the voicing was funny, and I almost broke a rib laughing with the plot.
Good luck with your flashes :D

whos mc lars?

Am I just falling behind again or is MC lars really unpopular?

TheEmoKiller responds:

idk who he is
hey clawwww!

O.K.

Well, I cant say its bad, but I cant say its really good either. Like you said, this is your first submission, and you actually tried here. You didnt make a chunk of steaming crap and try to excuse it for being your first flash submission. Im glad you tried, and the plot seems like an interesting one.

What I might suggest is make the text stay on screen longer, and make the falls more realistic. (When the guy gets shot and falls for example). And since you are a beginner, use tweens, and not FBF (Frame by frame) animating.

Good luck!

Nice :D

I dont see why people cant give this a nice high score, it may have taken one day to make, and it might have Seemed pointless, but it is still a work of art and requires skill. I think it deserves a 2.9 minimum, and even if they are just lines going back and forth, it can be musical too, ex.-moving to the beat etc. And sometimes it can be quite entertaining.

The only suggestion I have is to have more 'effects', like for example that orange blob you made zip across the screen etc.

Good luck.

Could use some work.

What I would suggest is slow down some of it. I cant read the text because it goes by too fast. I get lafway through reading the longer stuff and its gone. Also, use tweens instead of FBF moving objects manually... Some sounds would be great, this lacks the sound part. Another tip would be to create a walking cycle.

So after you improve those things, I think you can create much higher quality flash.
But for effort you get 5/5 :D It seems you actually tried here.

Very good

Deep, and attractive.

I loved the effects you used. But I loved even more the deep and grasping storyline. That final scene with the steering wheel being let go and spinning out, just made this an instant favorite for me. And VERY nice drawings by the way!

Make more, since there isnt too much too improve with your great skills. I bow to you.

I liked it.

Well, the drawings were nice, and fighting action was good as well. Though it lacked colour. Also, why did the man have a nazi symbol on his back?

Try to improve the length and colours, and this will be MUCH better!

Damned global warming, mess with my weather will you?

David Shevtsov @The-claww

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