ahaha
pretty funny lol
ahaha
pretty funny lol
awesome
Pretty nasty but it cracked me up
That was pretty funny :D
Really liked the 3d animation, really brings some fresh content to newgrounds. Keep it up, great work.
Loved it
Great job here! I really enjoyed your drawing style and the poem itself was great. And yes it is kind of short but still really well done. Good job!
hey thanx glad you liked it
Nice lol
I liked it! What I can suggest you do next time is detail your drawing a bit more, it would add to your score. Also, what a lot of artists have trouble with are backgrounds, I see you had SOME background drawings but not alot. Be sure to draw a background every time to give your viewers a feel for setting.
And if you are not good with drawing backgorunds, just do your best, and use a slight low quality blur.
And thats about it, I enjoyed the humour too, just keep it up and always stride to improve.
9/10
5/5
-Dave
Thanks! I agree with all that, because after finishing the main animation itself i added all the sound and backgrounds on afterwards, and i think i rushed them too much. If i have some spare time when I'm not making all my other stuff, I'll draw some proper backgrounds and re-submit it.
Man!!!
Thats like a perfect flash of my life. Damn I need to start handing projects in.
The Flash was very nice! Your FBF skills are awesome! I just loved the style of characters and the colouring you used. Great flahs man!
Loved it
Very good. Especially for a first submission. It made me realise how much of a fool I have been for the last 2 years. And how much I lost when I could have gained. Anyways, touching, very good.
Thanks alot! It's amazing that I look back on this animation and think, "Jeeze, what a load of shite!" but at the same time, I'm happy it still has the same effect on people.
Maybe I'll redo this for a more broader audience. Knowing of course the risk of being called an "emo fag" over and over once again. . . Oh yes, and a child! Lol.
Thanks again man. Take care.
Nice :D
I liked tht alot, funny stuff. The onlt suggestion I have is to draw more of the characters instead of bitmap tracin' em. But I really liked this piece anyways :D
thank you very much
Very nice
It may not be the most graphically intense movie, but the art was very well done. This is some of your best work yet, your flash created and communicated a good moral. I very much enjoyed this and hope you keep up this style of art.
-Dave
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