The-claww's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Streamline - FBF]

Wow!

That wasnt bad at all! It was too short though, but your ideas are very entertaining! Keep it up! Maybe take the time and do the whole song? 5/5 for you! I am usually not too easy on submissions, but this, even though short, was pretty entertaining.
Once again, keep it up!

Graeme responds:

Awsome! so glad to hear good reviews! makes me want to make more flashes! to bad i procrastinate so much. anyways, glad you liked it so much!!

[Internetless]

Not too bad

It wasnt front page stuff. But it kind of spoke out to me in a way. As I felt just like you did when my internet failed on me too. I see you atleast tried here, and thats what matters really.

What suggestions I have is to improve your drawings, just spend more time on them. I see you use tweens for animation alot, so dont be hesitative to use filters, they add alot to the effects of any movie. As for the drawing, just spend a bit more time adding to those critical details, try using the smallest paint brush size, and zooming in to draw. That adds small details and improves overall looks of just about anything.

Well, good luck! 5/5, simply because it spoke out to me. :D

H3LPM3 responds:

Well to let you know, I am already working on a new film that WILL have better voices, soundFX, detail and animation.

Thank you for letting me know what you think and giving me hints, I appreciate it.

[Slap!]

Pretty good

You two have got to give your voice acting more realism, when the yellow guy screams, you can tell its a very fake one, go to a quiet room in your house and actually scream, and adjust the volume later if you need to... You animations will seem better then.
Best of luck,- Dima

dumassstudios responds:

we did the voices at 4am in the morning so we had to be quiet

[Sternman: russia]

I find this an insult

Maybe I am missing out on something but for now I find this an insult, no offense, im not trying to be a dick but all I see is static, a picture, and a badly animated dude running back and forth.
The song is a russian (very old) folk song I believe, seeing you did not edit that to be hateful is why I cannot try to flag this flash.

Ok, anyways, I dont find this flash helpful to anyone, or funny, im sorry. a 3/10

possibly-yodd responds:

THis is not meant to be hateful in any sort of manner. I personally have a strong russian background in the family, and I speak some (but not well) russian.

This is not being hateful in anyway.

[StagBeetle Rides a Bus]

I Don't understand...

Usually I am one to go for the simple humor... But I did not understand this piece at all.... maybe a storyline would make this better?

StagBeetle responds:

It HAD a storyline. A bunch of people get on a bus and it explodes.