pretty funny lol
Pretty nasty but it cracked me up
That was pretty funny :D
Really liked the 3d animation, really brings some fresh content to newgrounds. Keep it up, great work.
Great job here! I really enjoyed your drawing style and the poem itself was great. And yes it is kind of short but still really well done. Good job!
hey thanx glad you liked it
I got to admit I wouldnt do that when i was 13, you got balls i guess :)
And yeah it was funny too :D A bit weird but sure I got my giggles out of it. The only thing i see wrong is that its a webcam, this is a flash site, and newgrounds can be a very hard audience, and they enjoy flash work better than webcam.
But still a good job nonetheless, Keep it up?
Oh I'm keeping it up. Thx for the review!
I liked it! What I can suggest you do next time is detail your drawing a bit more, it would add to your score. Also, what a lot of artists have trouble with are backgrounds, I see you had SOME background drawings but not alot. Be sure to draw a background every time to give your viewers a feel for setting.
And if you are not good with drawing backgorunds, just do your best, and use a slight low quality blur.
And thats about it, I enjoyed the humour too, just keep it up and always stride to improve.
Thanks! I agree with all that, because after finishing the main animation itself i added all the sound and backgrounds on afterwards, and i think i rushed them too much. If i have some spare time when I'm not making all my other stuff, I'll draw some proper backgrounds and re-submit it.
Thats like a perfect flash of my life. Damn I need to start handing projects in.
The Flash was very nice! Your FBF skills are awesome! I just loved the style of characters and the colouring you used. Great flahs man!
Very good. Especially for a first submission. It made me realise how much of a fool I have been for the last 2 years. And how much I lost when I could have gained. Anyways, touching, very good.
Thanks alot! It's amazing that I look back on this animation and think, "Jeeze, what a load of shite!" but at the same time, I'm happy it still has the same effect on people.
Maybe I'll redo this for a more broader audience. Knowing of course the risk of being called an "emo fag" over and over once again. . . Oh yes, and a child! Lol.
Thanks again man. Take care.
I loved that! Very very intertaining. Havent seen a movie so well animated for a long while. Nice choice of music, very interesting setting and character appearance. And some good humor in here too. I dont know what to say, any suggestions I can ever give you is useless because obviously you know exactly what youre doing. .All I can say is keep this up! Good work! Going into my faves list.
I liked tht alot, funny stuff. The onlt suggestion I have is to draw more of the characters instead of bitmap tracin' em. But I really liked this piece anyways :D
thank you very much
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