The-claww's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Quick collab 3]

Not very good.

The part with strawberry clock and the gnome made me laugh quite a bit. But the other part with pineapple and peach clock was very effortless and pointless.

So even though one part gave me the giggles, this was very short, very undetailed ( You used Trace Bitmap ), and not too enjoyable. Open Gloves, you did a good job with the voicing, but I cant say much for key clock.

OvenGloves responds:

thanks
also it was supposed to be KeyClocks signature once and its pineapple and orange

yeah i know it was short, thats why it was QUICK collab and thats the style im going for (not bitmap trace, just bitmaps i made in photoshop

[Spongebob Erection HENTAI]

Not too good.

I really see no point in this flash piece. Maybe you can take out the nudity in the future, take out the copyright characters, and try to spend some more time actually animating the flash. And if you must submit flash work such as this one, try to atleast make some more keyframes and maybe extend the tweening. Because it looked like patrick was 'lagging'. As far as I know that hapenned because you only had one tween going forward, and you just copied the previous keyframe I believe. But you probably know all this. And one more thing, I understand you used a program like speakonia, or something like it, I dont think you did a good job using it, slow down the speech, lower the pitch, and keep the words simple since the computer cant recognize many of the harder ones.

Anyways, good luck whatever you guys might do next. I just hope you submit your next work with more effort than this one.

[Parents Can't Drive]

Funny

I laughed quite a few times there. That phone service company was the best!

ANyways, all I can suggest is to make it longer if you can :)
otherwise its real good. Oh yeah and what are those two white spaces on the right and left? Did you forget to change your resolution?

[WAR - Grey Death]

Wow

For a stick movie that was absolutely amazing!
Kudos and a 5/5 for you!

export-gold responds:

THNX

[Hikaru Love]

I kind of liked it!

It was undetailed honestly. Dont get me wrong, the character animation was great, but they werent coloured in, and there was no sound or background. But because your drawing were really nice, I liked it, I like anime anyways so I cant say its bad.

Good work I guess.

[The Allround Tutorial FIX]

Well it was okay.

Well, you could have provided a bit more details in some parts, but mostly it was okay. Screenshots are always good, so I cant complain there. The only real thing that bothered me, was the dark background and that hard to read text, use plain style text when making tutorials, it seems less frustrating to a learning flash artist.

Good luck on your future projects!

[The Apocalypse Collab]

Im Satisfied :)

This came out very overall. Yeah, we did face alot of ups and downs, lots of problems (thanks to circuit city). But we came back better than ever :D
I shouldnt even be saying "we", it was all Rudy,he lost the files, circuit city didnt do crap, and yet he collected everything, remade his parts, put together everything basically. I believe everyone enjoyed doing their parts, I know I did.

I was just really overwhelmed to how long this was, but suprisingly it didnt take very long to load. And 4 songs? Wow, I was expecting 2 at most. But wow, 4...

Anyways, I hope everyone enjoys this!

Rudy responds:

Thanks, you made this collab one hell of a legend. Ahah. THANK YOU MISTER.

[Streamline - FBF]

Wow!

That wasnt bad at all! It was too short though, but your ideas are very entertaining! Keep it up! Maybe take the time and do the whole song? 5/5 for you! I am usually not too easy on submissions, but this, even though short, was pretty entertaining.
Once again, keep it up!

Graeme responds:

Awsome! so glad to hear good reviews! makes me want to make more flashes! to bad i procrastinate so much. anyways, glad you liked it so much!!

[Internetless]

Not too bad

It wasnt front page stuff. But it kind of spoke out to me in a way. As I felt just like you did when my internet failed on me too. I see you atleast tried here, and thats what matters really.

What suggestions I have is to improve your drawings, just spend more time on them. I see you use tweens for animation alot, so dont be hesitative to use filters, they add alot to the effects of any movie. As for the drawing, just spend a bit more time adding to those critical details, try using the smallest paint brush size, and zooming in to draw. That adds small details and improves overall looks of just about anything.

Well, good luck! 5/5, simply because it spoke out to me. :D

H3LPM3 responds:

Well to let you know, I am already working on a new film that WILL have better voices, soundFX, detail and animation.

Thank you for letting me know what you think and giving me hints, I appreciate it.

[Sternman Gets Trippy]

hehe

Very good.
I enjoy watching the sternman make his rounds :D

Yes... Thats right, I actually enjoy something in life for once :)